Tell me what has become of me?
I see the green but I don't see the red,
Silent dreams that are left unsaid.
My dreams have faded black.
I am left aside, put in the limelight,
and left aside again.
Oh! the path seems lonely,
My Lord heal the hurt and pain.
I lose my pride bit by bit,
In that moment that crept by.
I long for that feeling,
That feeling of eternity.
My soul seems unrest and grieving.
By the constant lack of sensibility.
Wonder if I have lost the reason,
to everything and for everyone.
I saw you cry,
I saw you survive.
But I am barely through.
I dig my way in most of the time.
Hope you don't mind.
After all I become blind.
from time to time.
As days pass by,
I realise, there is more to me than my pride.
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I see the red
I see the dead
But when I see the blue
It's the black instead
Her hot spring of smile
her smell so fair
I can see from a mile
the curl of her hair
Her eyes so deep
her eyes when weep
crying for the promises
that neither could keep
Besides the strife
Besides the life
It’s the end of world
Or just an edge of a knife
I wish for more
But I wish no more
I wish I could say
I could be no more
This is nice piece of poetry..and well varun has given a nice addition to this....
u know what i like especially in this was when u said that there is more to u and u bcome blind......its the way most of us are today...
@Thanks Shahid
I liked these lines:
After all I become blind.
from time to time.
How true.
wow!!!
u r getting deep girl!!
keep it up!!
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